First off, the background is marvelous. The stars around Rukia do a very good job in bringing the focus onto her, but they create a somewhat busy feeling and could use a slight tone down maybe but as it is I like it. Past t hat the style of the "hold on" text under the Ryukia text doesn't seem to go well with the rest of the wall.


Overall wonderful job on your first paper, one of my favorite Ruykia walls.